Autumn Children (Take 1) – Pages 1-9

As some of you may have guessed, Guns and Roses was intended to be a Game of Thrones-inspired story about a war between noble families with a Youmu x Reisen romance in the middle.

But during the fourth rewrite of the script, I found it growing too long to do in a reasonable time, and found it difficult to close some of the plot holes. I realized then that I was not a good enough writer to achieve my intentions.

To Sam and Leo, I apologize for not giving you the Youmu x Reisen you were so eagerly anticipating. I am burnt out on brainstorming Youmu x Reisen right now, but I will try again next year, with a different and simpler theme, and hopefully I will be able to finish.

For this year, however, I have decided to do something random.


Muffin’s Random Touhou Pairing Generator

And you thought your pairings were crack.


Presenting:

Autumn Children

The title comes from the traditional Irish song Autumn Child, also known as The Beauties of Autumn. Listen to the song here. If anyone ever wondered what would happen if I focused on big-sister characters instead of the usual lolis, you can stop wondering. Let’s go!

Cover

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To be continued on August 20.

Screentones from Comic Genesis.

6 comments on “Autumn Children (Take 1) – Pages 1-9

  1. The year after that, check “All Four Quadrants.” 😉

    *goes to actually read it*

  2. Oooh, I like how the drama is set up so early. Their hairstyles are similar so it’s a bit confusing, but I guess the leaf helps a lot.

  3. Oh, right, I forgot to actually respond after I read it.

    Yeah, I have to agree. It’s definitely a cute and interesting start, but aside from the leaf, it is pretty hard to tell them apart.

    Of course, that might just be the RNG messing with us. All RNGs are sentient, doncha know, the difference is in what kind of sense of humor they have. 😉

  4. Oh you better come up with something next year you jerk >:c

    although the GoT inspiration would’ve flown right over my head so that’s probably for the best.

  5. @Leo: Sorry to let you down, but no UdoMyon is better than bad or incomplete UdoMyon, right?

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