Autumn Children (Take 1) – Pages 29-30

The end of Act 2 is coming next week. Normally the deciding blow of a battle should get more space than it did, but expanding Parsee’s speech earlier in the act made it necessary to cut a page from the battle. I decided to save time and stay within the “16 pages per act” page limit rather than go over. Besides, the important revelation (that needs the space more) comes after the battle, not during it.

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