Autumn Children – Art Consistency Edits

I decided not to live with the art consistency issues. Instead of continuing the story, I fixed previous pages.

Page 03: Before | After
Shizuha becomes shorter. When I started, I intended to make Shizuha taller, because she’s a big sister. But beginning with the scene where Shizuha flies off, I unconsciously made her smaller and didn’t notice until 20 pages later.

Page 04: Before | After
Shizuha becomes shorter.

Page 05: Before | After
Shizuha becomes shorter.

Page 09: Before | After
Changed Shizuha’s house to match its final form, on Page 32.

Page 11: Before | After
Changed Shizuha’s house to match its final form.

Page 20: Before | After
Changed Shizuha’s house to match its final form.

In addition to the art changes, there is a new page, Page 33, inserted at the beginning of Act 3. All the previous pages of Act 3 have been shifted up by 1. All comments are still attached to the posts containing the pages the comments were referring to.

I added the new page because I felt it was strange that Shizuha didn’t so much as thank Lunasa for her help in the battle against Parsee. It should also provide a smoother transition after the end of Act 2. The story should still fit into the 50-page limit. It might actually end up shorter than that.

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